Seems I lied. I realized it fit quite well up to the bust, so it would make a lovely pattern for an underbust. Yeah, I'm slow.
The shape seems good, but it might just be the twist the twill put in it. I will never use twill again - this was VERY CAREFULLY on grain and it still twisted. I suppose it's okay for a mock-up, but not for a finished product.
You want pictures? they suck. I didn't have the patience to ask a friend to take pictures and the bathroom mirror really should have been cleaned first.
But you can look if you really want to.
I like the shaping at the top (this is good, since I have to fit a 12 inch busk in, since that's what I have on hand). Not so sure about the transition between the last two panels.